deviant ART

[x]

Jasmin The Lukewarm by ~luna-sakura:iconluna-sakura:



her body is fragile
like a doll
she's been played with, abused, and now forgotten
in the lonesome darkness

drifting...
gray fills her mind..
the bright colors fade...

every night in her box
she looks out that window
to watch the moon shrowded in darkness
tears run down her cheeks

she lives from that silver light
face in her hands making puddles,
she looks at the reflection and wants to disappear

her cold eyes watch with saddness,
her heart beats with desire,
her mind spins in frustration.

she cries,"to only see his face...his face"
wishing, waiting, wanting
lifless and lukewarm
dreaming for what she cannot have.

oh but true love waits
true love awaits
imagining and thinking
"what would i do"

the anger, the envy, the grief
consume her dying soul,
that waits for her other half.
Creative Commons License
Some rights reserved. This work is licensed under a
Creative Commons Attribution-Noncommercial-No Derivative Works 3.0 License.
Details
Submitted: February 1
File Size: 1.0 KB
Image Size: 0 bytes
Resolution: 0×0
Comments: 13
Favourites & Collections: 1 [who?]

Views
Total: 47
Today: 0

Downloads
Total: 0
Today: 0

Thumb

Author's Comments

most of my poems are about me.
hope you like this one.
I'm still going through a dark time...hopefully it will end soon.....

Devious Comments

love 0 0 joy 0 0 wow 0 0 mad 0 0 sad 0 0 fear 0 0 neutral 0 0

!sasorilicious:iconsasorilicious: Feb 1, 2008, 1:24:16 PM
yay!!have you heard a song called father of mine?

--
must obey the taco man.i got chocolate bubble gum.
~luna-sakura:iconluna-sakura: Feb 1, 2008, 1:27:22 PM
no who is it by?

--
as dead as leaves...
!sasorilicious:iconsasorilicious: Feb 1, 2008, 1:29:13 PM
by everclear.
...
it`s about a guy remembering his dad before he left the mom and how he`s like how do you feel when u look back on a wasted life and u don`t see me?

--
must obey the taco man.i got chocolate bubble gum.
~luna-sakura:iconluna-sakura: Feb 1, 2008, 1:33:52 PM
oh wow....sad....i'll check it out. I heard "Local God" by them.

--
as dead as leaves...
!sasorilicious:iconsasorilicious: Feb 1, 2008, 1:35:50 PM
ic have heard any of these :
wish you were here
rehab
tears dry on their own
runaway train
steady as she goes
santeria

--
must obey the taco man.i got chocolate bubble gum.
~luna-sakura:iconluna-sakura: Feb 2, 2008, 8:26:49 PM
nope.

--
as dead as leaves...
!sasorilicious:iconsasorilicious: Feb 2, 2008, 8:35:49 PM
ughhhhhhhhhhh hate parental ppl.

--
must obey the taco man.i got chocolate bubble gum.
~luna-sakura:iconluna-sakura: Feb 3, 2008, 12:28:08 PM
mee too! very much!
NO SCHOOL TOMORROW!!!

--
as dead as leaves...
!sasorilicious:iconsasorilicious: Feb 3, 2008, 8:52:03 PM
yay no skewl!!go to the chat button and search riseoftheakatsuki i`m in there right now!!

--
must obey the taco man.i got chocolate bubble gum.