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Wither by ~luna-sakura:iconluna-sakura:



Forever be alone…
Contemplating my existence.
To live vicariously…
Through my fantasy realm.

To think…
And make my mind, my heart..
Impenetrable.
Face reality and harden.

No wishing, no imagining…
Only knowing…
What is beyond our minds, our thoughts…
The past, present, future.

But to set my soul..kinetic.
Intertwined me and my otherhalf.
To be together…
And Sail To The Moon.

Impossible to turn my back,
To Runaway…
Because it’s Where I End…
That You Begin.
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yeah one of my many poems of me wandering this insignificant world searching and waiting for my other half.

well i hope many of you at least think it's good.

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~KarmaRebel:iconKarmaRebel: Feb 27, 2008, 11:02:59 PM
I love it! It's awesome.

I love how you combined
"Vicarious" - Tool
"Kinetic" - Radiohead
"Sail to the Moon" - Radiohead
&
"Where I End You Begin" - Radiohead
together into a poem like a puzzle. Cool!